Some people say that modern innovation s bring a lot more problems than benefits?Do you agree or disagree?

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The effectiveness of contemporary revolutions is highly debatable.

Although

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some people assert that

such

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changes pave the way towards more complications, others consider them to be of paramount importance in individual’s life. I

confidently disagrees

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confidently disagree

am confidently disagreeing

have confidently disagreed

with the given statements and the reasons for my stand will be

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

further

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. The foremost reason for my disagreement is that,

endeavours

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the endeavours

of trailblazers

inevitably facilitates

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inevitably facilitate

human’s life.

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, because the outcomes of the persistent efforts of innovators are straightforwardly accessible, people do not have to strive for the conclusion of their task. To exemplify, the innovation of the goods carrier vehicles eradicated the manual efforts required in delivering goods

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, because modern

upgradation

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offers a significant degree of convenience to people, it is advantageous to the human life.

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, a decade ago, none of the banking work was concluded without visiting banks whereas at present movement,

majority

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the majority

of them is finished with the succour of internet banking, which is

quintessential illustration

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the quintessential illustration

of modern innovation. Another reason for my disagreement is because of the cost-effectiveness of contemporary transformations.

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, they are highly capable to save

vast amount

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vast amounts

a vast amount

of individuals’ money. To illustrate,

few years

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a few years

ago, individuals had to invest

colossal amount

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the colossal amount

a colossal amount

of revenue to acquire knowledge about their education, which is available at free of cost on Google now a days.

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, because contemporary revolutions

has evolved

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have evolved

the communications among individuals, it is highly beneficial. To illustrate, a decade ago, people used to communicate by letters or telegrams, which was difficult,

however

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, utilisation of telephones has eliminated

such

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hard ways of communicating. In conclusion, contemporary

upgradations

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do not lead to problems rather it brings some cost effective solutions to the problems. I

strongly disagrees

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strongly disagree

with

given

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gave

statement

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a statement

the statement

and suggest people to embark availing modern innovations.

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Some people say that modern innovation s bring a lot more problems than benefits?Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money should be invested better in other areas. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. What problems arise from this and how can they be tackled?