Nowadays some professions such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries.

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The earning of professionals

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as doctors

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lawyers and engineers

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have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

who

has

often been

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the subject matter of a conversation or discussion

subjected

suggested

to analysis stating that it is quite unfair to the other skilled workers who equally put in

same amount

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the same amount

of hard work.I find

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debate bit ridiculous the so called profissional worker have put in immense efforts towards securing their professional degrees,and their jobs are more demanding requiring higher order thinking and sometimes these individulas have to sacrifice their personal leisure and simple pleasures to cater to the needs of other individuals

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a doctors is requred to be on call 24*7 be it night or day an engineer needs to brave the nature or scale the heights that no feeble hearted can do. Let me give the example of Mahatma Gandhi

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who as a lawyer could

comprehen

get the meaning of something

comprehend

the evil of

foriegn

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

rule and fought it to bring freedom to his nation.

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I believe that teachers should

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be included in

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category because

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is not possible to cultivate great minds without the relentless efforts of an educator. Having said

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I would like

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to recapitulate

that the above mentioned

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professional, deserve

professional deserve

professional deserves

getting higher salaries for their efforts and dedicated work they provide to the nation and contributions towards is

deveolpment

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developments

and growth.

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it is fully justified to give them high salaries.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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214 words

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Nowadays some professions such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries.

Fully explain your ideas

today many people work until a later age. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays in many countries, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some countries pay high salaries to its employees. It is argued that countries must not do it and impose limits on salaries. Do you agree or disagree ?