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More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in cities. What problem can this cause? How can these problem be solved?

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The nowadays immense amount of people have opted for living in cities rather than the countryside. Most people believe that living in a
city
 has more positive sides in the education sphere and living standards.
Nevertheless
, it has some drawbacks as well as advantages.
First
 of all, living in a
city
 can lead to several issues relating environmental problems in cities
such
 as noise pollution. What’s more, it can bring health issues
such
 as high blood pressure as well as feeling stressed. It mainly happens among older people. In order to tackle
this
 issue, the people moving to the
city
 should be careful about their health and do visit to medical establishments for being examined on a regular basis. Another major issue might be cost of living which is more expensive in comparison with rural areas. The government could be a possible measurement of reducing costly prices in all parts of commercial products and taxes as well.
Further
 obvious subject could be
lack
Suggestion
a lack
 of places provided in the
city
 as it is considered to be as a cosmopolitan
city
 with
huge amount
Suggestion
a huge amount
 of entertainment places including theatre, opera as well as
majority
Suggestion
the majority
a majority
 of skyscrapers. To solve
this
 problem, people should stop the process of constructing the buildings which have not
benefits
Suggestion
benefitted
benefited
 for the state like entertaining clubs should be restricted by setting strict rules. To pen down, every person has a preference for choosing high standards of living in order to excel their aims.
Nevertheless
, they may face
to
being one more than one
two
 challenges that are tough to deal with.
Submitted by Sardor Surmanov on

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