Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

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In the past, a family would be proud to drive for several hours to have a riverside picnic. Today,
however
, people
don’t even think
Suggestion
won’t even think
about flying a thousand miles to another country for a family holiday. The increasing international tourism seen in recent years has brought some adverse effects on host countries. There appear to be several main courses of
this
and two possible solutions, as we will explain here. Perhaps the primary factor is that tourism creates pollutions and waste, which may possess severe threats to the local environment, ranging from contaminating water, soil, and air to
lost
Suggestion
lose
wildlife habitats.
For example
, emission from cars, aeroplanes and other
tourist
activities contain damage polluter particles, which can cause air pollution and
contaminant
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contaminated
rainwater run-off and taint soil and water bodies (rivers and lakes). We often see lakes/
rivers partly
Accept comma addition
rivers, partly
cover with plastic floaters and rubbish, resulting in
potential environmental hazard
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a potential environmental hazard
affecting residents.
Furthermore
, the building of facilities and infrastructure by the
tourist
industry
can destroy the habitat of wild animals.
Finally
, local traditions and cultures may be endangered by the process of cultural assimilation, mainly Western cultural influence. We often see
this
in some
Asia
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Asian
countries, where many young people would know well about the names of Western pop stars while knowing little about their country figureheads.
This
problem may even prominent in rural areas of Africa countries. Regarding potential solutions, probably the
first
remedy would be the responsibilities of the education system.
For example
, a joint initiative by the local Council and
Tourist
Office to provide information about local environmental protection rules into
tourist
information packages.
This
information should be
sign-posted
a post bearing a sign that gives directions or shows the way
signposted
the labels and sites for rubbish disposition correctly. Another solution may be for governments to pass laws and regulations, which protect animal habitats and local lands from being used by the
tourist
industry
commercially. Overall, the main problems seem to focus on environmental damage, endangered wildlife, and local culture assimilating. The possible solutions involve a better educational system and local government’s laws and policies to regulate the
tourist
industry
. Hopefully, these measurements would be able to protect the local community while keeping the
tourist
industry
flourish to benefit the local people and the economy.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • cultural preservation
  • economic disparity
  • local communities
  • environmental impact
  • overcrowding
  • infrastructure
  • responsible tourist
  • revenue distribution
  • marketing campaign
  • community engagement
  • littering
  • overuse of resources
  • cultural appreciation
  • health risks
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