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students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Education is one of most important things that everyone should have or have experienced it. Being educated is a formula to increase or develop human resource, manners, attitudes, even their capability towards the intended aims for the sake of goodness. Education out of home nowadays is well known as formal education where students go to
school
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 and meet their teachers and other friends. The teacher at
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 is the main actor who has a big responsibility of his/her student’s development. Not only to transform and deliver science or
insight but
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insight, but
 to teach them how to have good manner in their life as well. Teachers often stay under complicated conditions whether they prefer to punish the students who break the rules (disobedient) as an example to the others for not doing the same or they reward students who accomplish a good achievement as motivation for
another
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 students. I do disagree if the teacher only considers that rewarding students will affect their performance better in
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 rather than punished. In my books, both ways have their conditional role that can be done by every teacher, in order to make students realize on what they obliged to. The students who are getting used to be rewarded tends to do something just when they know that there will be praise or prize if they finish doing it. Time by time, it certainly makes students lazy to do something under their own sincerity and generosity.
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, students who usually receive a punishment, they will probably not be easy to do something on their own desire except the existence of a threat, they will be much more under fear rather than having motivated. On those considerations, I concluded that both ways have each important role in
student’s self development
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the student’s self development
 in their education. And at
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, Teachers as an educator must be able to place their position right on its decent/suitable action towards their students. And I believe that whereas punishments or rewards both are beneficial for students' performance at their
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