Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, payment for celebrities and professionals have been receiving a great deal of public attention.
Although
the idea of not giving athletes and celebrities a higher salary, they are Linking Words
also
the ones who deserve to be respected and have high-income. It is easy to understand that doctors, nurses and teachers play an important role in our lives and they Linking Words
also
need to be payed more for some reasons. Linking Words
First
, as these people directly relate to citizens’ health and education, a high earning will encourage students to follow majors like nursing. In fact, if the rate of people Linking Words
working decent
jobs has an upward trend, the country will be more prosperous. Accept comma addition
working, decent
Second
, Linking Words
by passing
many difficulties in studying and practicing, professionals can have enough knowledge and experience to do their job. avoid something unpleasant or laborious
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This
means that they have to receive respective income, which helps the government to retain them devote to the country. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, entertainment and sports stars who Linking Words
also
contribute to society should be given high earning. Linking Words
First
, like professionals, in order to be successful in their career, these Linking Words
stars
usually have sleepless nights to practice and have a mercantile establishment for the retail sale of goods or services
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stories
injury
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an injury
that is
why they need to receive high income. Linking Words
For example
, models endure the pain due to their ankle sprain or their broken Linking Words
leg which
are caused by practicing and their Accept comma addition
leg, which
sacrificecould
be offset by a higher salary. Suggestion
sacrifice could
Second
, for entertainment and sports provide a big amount of GDP, models, artists and athletes are deserving to be well-paid as they are the people support the entertainment and sport industries
In conclusion, both professionals and celebrities who are working and bringing the benefits for Linking Words
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should be paid equally.Suggestion
their country
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