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Traditional classrooms in the past held lectures with multiple participants. Now that technology makes it easier and faster for students to access information, the need for traditional classroom discussion is becoming less popular. It’s because the internet is a more effective method than the regular classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What is your personal opinion?

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The technological
landscape often
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landscape, often
 changes very rapidly nowadays. With technological advancements and innovations, it becomes possible for students to have their classes online. Some of the people are over the opinion that the effectiveness and convenience of internet-based courses have lessened the popularity of regular classes. I fervently agree with the statement and will discuss my view in
this
 essay. Internet-based lectures are beneficial for students over the conventional ones in myriad ways.
Firstly
, learners have the chance to choose a suitable lecture environment,
such
 as online learning, resulting in the study more effective and efficient than they would have in participating in a classroom course.
Furthermore
, in online courses, materials
such
 as the slides, videos of the classes or e-books are uploaded, so students can review them any time they prefer without being worried about losing any point of the lecture.
Besides
, students would be able to save up a substantial amount of money by attending online courses without needing to pay for their accommodation and transportation, meaning they can save up the considerable amount of money for housing, and reduce borrowing of the
students’
Suggestion
student
 loan. More specifically, while the capacity of classrooms is one of the obstacles of traditional classes, teachers could conduct online events without worrying about the number of attendees. Especially in
current Covid-19 pandemic situation
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current Covid-19 pandemic situations
the current Covid-19 pandemic situation
, where social distancing order has to be followed, meaning down-size of classes significantly as the results; even fewer students can attend traditional courses. Admittedly, it is true that conventional classroom teaching is likely to encourage knowledge debate as well as social interactions between peers, meaning students can spend a large amount of their free time to discuss issues that they are interested. Even though I still feel that online learning would offer more flexible learning. In conclusion, it appears that online classes are more fruitful and convenient outweigh the regular ones with the benefits of free choosing lecture environment and less costly, providing additional social and communication support are in places.
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