You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Danubia Juliao, I am one of your loyal readers.
However
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, I am writing
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letter regarding an article
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in the magazine
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week, which brought
a wrong
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wrong information
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information
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about my
town
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, Ubtsfore. On
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page number 35 the periodic lists the importance of certain industries, putting
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tourism in the
last
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position. I would like to bring to your attention that my
town
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's economy is completely moved by the tourism sector, which can be proved by the search released by the Senso 2020. According to
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reliable and official source,
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sector is the
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one in importance,
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which you can be found on their website (www.senso.com).
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, it is imperative to send the right
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for your readers as it will be a recognition of
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sector value, as well as a great opportunity of showing to them what we are good at.
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that, it will bring more tourists as well as investors to my
town
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. For
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reason, I would like to ask you to correct
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information
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on the
next
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edition of the magazine, making sure to bring the attention to your readers about the previous wrong
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. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to reading your
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edition with my
town
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on more time in it. Yours faithfully, Danubia Juliao.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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