You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Danubia Juliao, I am one of your loyal readers.
However
, I am writing this
letter regarding an article veiculated
in the magazine Correct your spelling
vesiculated
this
week, which brought a wrong
Remove the article
wrong information
a piece of wrong information
information
about my town
, Ubtsfore.
On the
page number 35 the periodic lists the importance of certain industries, putting Correct article usage
apply
the
tourism in the Correct article usage
apply
last
position. I would like to bring to your attention that my town
's economy is completely moved by the tourism sector, which can be proved by the search released by the Senso 2020. According to this
reliable and official source, this
sector is the first
one in importance, information
which you can be found on their website (www.senso.com).
Furthermore
, it is imperative to send the right information
for your readers as it will be a recognition of this
sector value, as well as a great opportunity of showing to them what we are good at. Besides
that, it will bring more tourists as well as investors to my town
.
For this
reason, I would like to ask you to correct this
information
on the next
edition of the magazine, making sure to bring the attention to your readers about the previous wrong information
.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to reading your next
edition with my town
on more time in it.
Yours faithfully,
Danubia Juliao.Submitted by danubiajuliao on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite