India handled COVID epidemic superbly. Do you agree or disagree? Substantiate your answer with two examples. Write 250 words.

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Combatting the deadly virus COVID-19 has been the most challenging task faced by all countries especially India.

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, I agree to a greater extent that Indian authorities have substance and strategically worked against the pandemic. In the below thesis, I will focus on how India’s fight against the deadly virus is appreciable despite two fundamental challenges

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is population and other is an inferior health care system to curb the prevailing menace.

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, it was almost impossible to stop the contraction of the disease from

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person to another.

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is because of the astronomical population in India.

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, the disease has been examined as most contagious due to its mutated nature. For

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reason the virus has the potential to float and sustain in the air for quite a long time.

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, the very

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measure that Indian Government took was lockdown in the entire country for more than two months including the railways and airways.

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strategy enacted measures in tracking the numbers of spread cases in zone wise or district wise. At the same time these immediate laws helped while breaking the chain of transmission.

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, indeed the health facilities in India are not up to the mark.

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is another drawback which could have resulted in turning earth into a burial site. Owing to the fact there were hardly any isolated wards in hospitals, very less PPE kits for doctors and few ventilators.

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can imagine that if there has been a surge in the cases of COVID-19 at the very beginning of the pandemic

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India eventually would have been the worst hit country by now. But the implementation of lockdown by the authorities, the hospitals and the people working in the front line got enough time importing essential commodities and tools like PPE kits and ventilators to support victims. I pen down by saying that the two initial steps taken by the Government,

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was lockdown to maintain social distancing and another was quickly upgrading the health amenities had been proved magical in restricting contagion at the initial stage of the pandemic.

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, breaking the chain to cease the transmission of the virus was much needed

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Submitted by Abhijit Bose on Mon Jul 20 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

364 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only provide for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

What can we learn from the boys' experience about the nature of power and leadership?

Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.