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some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is quite
debatable issue
Suggestion
a debatable issue
 of these days that whether physical education should be the part of the course or nor. Many people are in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of
this
 while there are some who oppose
this
 opinion. To me, it should be included in the course of
study
.
This
 essay will reflect both of the opinions.
To begin
 with, taking into the account benefits of physical activities are numerous and unbelievable.
For instance
, various studies have proved that children who take part in tournaments along with their
study
, are having a great power of
grabing
take hold of so as to seize or restrain or stop the motion of
grabbing
graphing
grasping
 the good scores. Reason is, as physical activities
improves
Suggestion
improve
 the blood circulation in each part of the body, especially brain, due to which it works well.
In addition
 to
this
, these students who are good at sports get selected and state and national level respectively and can shine better in their future.
On the contrary
, children who are totally dedicated to their studies, they have enough time to devote for their exams and are brilliant enough to crack any type of entrance exams. Due to which they are able to secure a higher wages posts and are accessible to numerous government jobs too.
Moreover due
Accept comma addition
Moreover, due
 to their good scores, they are able to secure scholarships, which makes them
easy
Suggestion
easier
 to support their family, as they can
study
 by their own without being a burden on their family. To recapitulate, it is clear that
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 though
study
Suggestion
the study
 is equally important for a
student but
Accept comma addition
student, but
 being physically active makes him shine better in every field.
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