some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is quite

debatable issue

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a debatable issue

of these days that whether physical education should be the part of the course or nor. Many people are in

favor

promote over another

favour

of

this

while there are some who oppose

this

opinion. To me, it should be included in the course of

study

.

This

essay will reflect both of the opinions.

To begin

with, taking into the account benefits of physical activities are numerous and unbelievable.

For instance

, various studies have proved that children who take part in tournaments along with their

study

, are having a great power of

grabing

take hold of so as to seize or restrain or stop the motion of

grabbing

graphing

grasping

the good scores. Reason is, as physical activities

improves

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improve

the blood circulation in each part of the body, especially brain, due to which it works well.

In addition

to

this

, these students who are good at sports get selected and state and national level respectively and can shine better in their future.

On the contrary

, children who are totally dedicated to their studies, they have enough time to devote for their exams and are brilliant enough to crack any type of entrance exams. Due to which they are able to secure a higher wages posts and are accessible to numerous government jobs too.

Moreover due

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Moreover, due

to their good scores, they are able to secure scholarships, which makes them

easy

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easier

to support their family, as they can

study

by their own without being a burden on their family. To recapitulate, it is clear that

of

from a particular thing or place or position

off

though

study

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the study

is equally important for a

student but

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student, but

being physically active makes him shine better in every field.