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In today's world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot. Discuss.

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Today's world is
of
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about
science
 and
technology
 and in
this
 fast pace world we still value our
tradition
 and
culture
. Undoubtedly the place of artists
such
 as musicians, painters and writers
are
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is
 vital in our society. The following paragraphs give a better insight into
this
 topic.
To begin
 with, there are multiple advantages of
science
 and
technology which
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technology, which
 are visible in our day to day
life
. But the necessity to preserve and value our
culture
 and
tradition
 is equally important. There are many examples where artist
such
 as musicians and dancers presents our history,
culture
 and
tradition
 beautifully. There are many ancient arts which are still performed by
them in
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them, in
 which they show all the
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 of
life
 and nature with humanity.
Secondly
, when it comes to painters we have seen many historical paintings in museums and the painting of "Monalisa" at the museum
at
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in
 Paris is one of the
example
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examples
.
This
 painting is still the matter of curiosity among historians.
Also there
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Also, there
 are many incredible novels based on our
art
,
culture
 and
tradition
. It is clearly visible that these novels are the beautiful portrayal of emotions through words.
Art
 helps us to understand
life
 in a better way. With Plethora of examples
on
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of
art
 and
artists we cannot
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artists, we cannot
 deny that
technology
 is equally important. To attain success any country need to depend on
science
 and
technology
. To become a developed
nation we
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nation, we
 need to focus on both
art
 and
science
. Developing nations like India and Japan are the examples. To
recapitulate I
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recapitulate, I
 would say that we should value our artists for their contribution in conserving our
culture
 and
tradition
. I believe that
art
 is the essence of
life
.
However
, we should understand the importance of
science
 and
technology
also
.
Submitted by Priyanka Nigam on

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