In today's world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot. Discuss.

Today's world is
of
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about
science
and
technology
and in
this
fast pace world we still value our
tradition
and
culture
. Undoubtedly the place of artists
such
as musicians, painters and writers
are
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is
vital in our society. The following paragraphs give a better insight into
this
topic.
To begin
with, there are multiple advantages of
science
and
technology which
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technology, which
are visible in our day to day
life
. But the necessity to preserve and value our
culture
and
tradition
is equally important. There are many examples where artist
such
as musicians and dancers presents our history,
culture
and
tradition
beautifully. There are many ancient arts which are still performed by
them in
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them, in
which they show all the
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
of
life
and nature with humanity.
Secondly
, when it comes to painters we have seen many historical paintings in museums and the painting of "Monalisa" at the museum
at
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in
Paris is one of the
example
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examples
.
This
painting is still the matter of curiosity among historians.
Also there
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Also, there
are many incredible novels based on our
art
,
culture
and
tradition
. It is clearly visible that these novels are the beautiful portrayal of emotions through words.
Art
helps us to understand
life
in a better way. With Plethora of examples
on
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of
art
and
artists we cannot
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artists, we cannot
deny that
technology
is equally important. To attain success any country need to depend on
science
and
technology
. To become a developed
nation we
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nation, we
need to focus on both
art
and
science
. Developing nations like India and Japan are the examples. To
recapitulate I
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recapitulate, I
would say that we should value our artists for their contribution in conserving our
culture
and
tradition
. I believe that
art
is the essence of
life
.
However
, we should understand the importance of
science
and
technology
also
.
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