Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Yes, I agree that the vast expansion of departmental stores cannot compete the small local shops. At certain extend these basic shops are used in case of urgent need and emergency. Most of the time these shopkeepers impose an extra amount of surcharge and margin in domestic goods. Yes, I agree that these small local grocery store reducing in the residence where it is essential for the resident. If the quality and price control ingredients bodies work together with these local groceries and marts it will work far better for everyone. They can include some different food items for enhancing and improving their sales and marketing by observing the demand of different nationalities. Most the time people from different countries always want to have their traditional food and grocery items. Through these things they can build up good relationships and terms with the buyer
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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