Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

age

of retirement, nowadays, is a challenging issue among people, due to the increase in life expectancy. It is argued that while the average of living

age

is being

increasing

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increased

; as a consequence, the

age

of retirement has to rise.

To begin

with,

although

the

age

of living seems to be increasing,

this

is important to consider old

people

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person's

performance. As individual

age

increases, the physical function decreases generally.

However

, it does not mean elderly people are unable to handle works, but full-time jobs may not be sufficient for them.

Besides

, it is true that they are well-experience in their jobs;

however

, it is noticeable that the atmosphere of jobs, especially these days, could be annoying for them. Competitive environment of works with growing technologies involved in them are more convenient for youngest

in contrast

to oldest in

age

of retiring.

Additionally

, older people have to be replaced with younger ones. When older people are

retired

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retiring

later,

youngest

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young

younger

people are employed later. To keep workplaces and societies balanced, the

age

of retirement is better to be the same and do not alter to allow younger people to be employed and could make their future and families. All in all, I think retiring people later due to the growth in living

age

is not the best decision, either for elderly people themselves or for other member of society. To be fair, younger people have to work as employees while if the elderly people stay at works longer, the opportunities for

youngest

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young

would not occur.