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The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In fact, peoples' curiosity about the mystery of
space
 has been the driving force for governments and international agencies to waste
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of resources and wealth in
space
 discovery.
However there
Accept comma addition
However, there
 are more urgent and crucial issues these cash should be directed to,
such
 as, poverty, healthcare and education, personally
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe these problems must be a priority on spending rather than wasting away tax payers money on discovering the universe. Historically,
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of fund was invested in developing rockets and
space ships
a spacecraft designed to carry a crew into interstellar space (especially in science fiction)
spaceships
, especially in the 1950s, when the Americans sent a rocket to the moon it was unimaginable and it expanded our horizons and impassion, but, they lost millions of dollars and they did not find
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of new scientific facts.
In other words
, there were
alot
Suggestion
a lot
 of people in the world who could have used
this
 wealth to have a better life or even to survive.
Moreover
, nowadays NASA and all similar agencies around the globe are throwing billions of dollars to have more discoveries in the
space
. It is undisputable fact that, citizens health and eduction are more important issues and they ought to be the place where officials directs all the resources for,
for instance
, while the poverty and starvation are on the rise
space
 agencies have spent billions of dollars these money might have solved at least half of the starvation on the globe.
In addition
, we have millions of people losing their lives because they are not able to afford hospital fees and medications. In my view we should cut the budget that goes to
space
 studies to save these lives. To sum it up,
although
 it is essential to keep scientific researches and try to go as far as possible in the universe, but taking care of human lives must be is the goal of any official or state.
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