Many species of animals and plants are in danger of becoming extinct. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

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In the contemporary era, the insects and plants are disappearing on the earth.Many experts think that
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is due to the global changing in the atmosphere.We can save their life.We can do many things in their life.I will discuss some points in subsequent paragraphs.
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, many other creatures lives in the jungle and nobody look after themselves.In the jungle they face problems related to their health and food.
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, the predators are
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hunting the different kind of animals and
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is the main cause of the species too wiped out from the forest.
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the government should ban on the poaching.
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, the makes the law that if any person hunts the animal they gives the harmful punishment.Some animals are dying due to epidemic and in the sea, mostly water species are dying due to dirty water
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All the drain water is throwing out the river and in
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way many diseases are appearing.
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, the plants are vanishing from the jungle.The people are cutting the tree from the forest for the tree wood is utilized to make different things, due to
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reason the air is very polluted.It is necessary to control the trimmer because people atmosphere is affected and people feel difficult to take a breath.For instinct, if oxygen is not according to the human needs, they bring a lot of problems.In conclusion.In the end
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would like to say that the animals and plants are the precious gift from ALLAH.It is the symbol of every country we save
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.The regime implements the law for those people who elimination
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species.
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