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In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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Traffic congestion is increasing day by day in most of the urban and rural areas and it is becoming a deteriorating situation all over the world. There are two major reasons of increasing traffic and to cope with
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 there are some measures which should be followed by every member of the society.
To begin
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 with,
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 cause of
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 situation is overpopulation, with the escalating of people all around the world, every member of the family
prefer
Suggestion
prefers
 to have his/ her own vehicle
,
Accept space
,
 which creates a high density of volume on roads.
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 cause is lack of proper road and bridges which creates a traffic
jams
Suggestion
jam
 on roads. Buses, trains and other private vehicles are running on
same road
Suggestion
the same road
 which ultimately creates road busy all the time. To mitigate
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this issue
these issues
,
governm
bring into conformity with rules or principles or usage; impose regulations
govern
 can create awareness among people to use of public transport and put heavy taxes on private transport.
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,
government
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the government
 should construct some new roads and bridges so that there would be
separate lane
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a separate lane
 for heavy vehicles. In
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 way, traffic could be controlled and less accidents and jam can be seen on
highways
Suggestion
the highways
. To
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Suggestion
sum up
, local authorities and individuals should work together to address
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 problem by following some measures. Individuals can use bicycles to ride to shorter distances.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urbanization
  • car ownership
  • public transportation
  • carpooling
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion pricing
  • population growth
  • commute
  • sustainable transport
  • traffic management
  • ride-sharing
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