Many parts of the world are losing natural resources such as animals, forest, fresh water. Is this really happening? Why do the resources need to be saved?

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The growing consumption of natural resources has dwindled several things

such

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as animals, forest and fresh

water

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This

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is an emergency for

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an automaton that resembles a human being

humanoid

human's

life

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in the future, so each of us must have our own awareness about the conservation and recovery of natural resources. If

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humand

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humans

do not save the resources, they will be dwindling shortly in

near future

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the near future

, so, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind power, rain power and nuclear power is necessary.

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will help to curb environmental deterioration,

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, the better environment for animals and

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humand

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humans

will be created. The protection of wildlife is

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a necessary law that the government has promulgated. Animals are one of the most important things in

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humand's

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human's

humans

life

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. Protecting animals are protecting ourselves. Just image that one day in the future, there are not any kinds of animals except

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all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humans

human

can maintain their

life

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in the world.

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terrible, right?

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, the most important thing without which people cannot live is

water

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. Every one can live up to seven days without eating any things, but just three days without drinking

water

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, we cannot survive. The shortage of pure

water

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must be stopped and it is not hard to do it, just about your own awareness. In conclusion, the over exploitation of natural resources is happening all over the world.

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Humand's

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Humanoids

Humans

duty is to prevent it from our

life

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. Utilize new sources of energy, conserve wildlife and stop wasting pure

water

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are

also

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the good

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the best

better

ways to do it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

251 words

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