Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Although

some people believe that excellent leaders are born and not get in the childhood, others claim that

leadership

ability

can get despite of time from obtaining the experience or the skill. In my opinion, I consider that

the good

Suggestion

the best

leaders are combination of both natural abilities and practical experiences.

First

of all, many people consider that the

leadership

can

learned

Suggestion

learn

in different age and I agree.

This

means that, practical experience

help

Suggestion

helps

to obtain new skills for leading

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in society.

For example

, people who gain new

ability

can use their skills in work or their business. Without

leadership

skills, many people cannot how improve their life or their country because they do not have special skills for changing our mind.

As a result

, many people can

applied

Suggestion

apply

in different work or business situation for evolving hard problems.

On the other hand

, people think that leaders must get

being one more than one

two

skills in the birth.

In other words

child

Suggestion

a child

who was born have

naturel

in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature

natural

leadership

ability

such

as energy and optimism which help

Suggestion

with

the problem solving.

For instance

, the each Russian kinder garden has several leaders in

special children group

Suggestion

the special children's group, that

the special children's group that

special children's group that

a special children's group that

that is

why they show their

ability

with childhood.

Thus

, people who have excellent

leadership

skills be

Accept comma addition

skills, be

able to change our mind and situation. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that the

leadership

ability

can get

with

Suggestion

new experience and practical skills.

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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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