Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believed it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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many individuals believed that environmental issues should be alleviated on a global scale,

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while

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many argued that dealing with them nationally is a better option. I agree with the former opinion, as it is beneficial in terms of both finance and implementation of

policies

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. On the one hand, many people

considered

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that environmental issues ought to

ameliorate

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be ameliorated

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on a global scale, and I agree with that as it has numerous benefits.

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, it is beneficial in terms of finance, when nations are dealing with these

type

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of issues they invest equally,

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and it

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is helpful for the countries who are struggling financially.

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, when they are dealing with these problems globally, it has become extremely easy to make

policies

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to protect the environment

as well

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as

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the implementation of the

policies

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become

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easier because our universe

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a global village, and communication between countries becomes easier which helps us to work as a team.

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, some argue that it should be done nationally, as it is time effective,

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, if a country has a successful plan to mitigate

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environmental problems

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can initiate the plan immediately, as they don’t have to wait for others to show interest because they are working to resolve the threat solely. Another benefit of doing

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on the national level is that the implementation of the

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can be effective immediately as they don’t have to wait for the approval of other countries, and they can monitor all the activities effectively. In conclusion,

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people have differences in their opinions, I consider that environmental problems should be ameliorated globally, as it is better for the nations

as well as

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for the universe.