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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

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In many parts of the world
,
Accept space
,
 the young nowadays are likely to embark on working with salary.
Therefore
, many people think that it is totally not suitable, others believe that
ones
Suggestion
one
 can gain precious practical knowledge from working at an early stage. Each statement reaps the benefits in its particular way,
however
 the best way is to focus on their study rather than working.
First
 and foremost, it is undeniable that when a young person can enter the workforce, he or she can perceive the experience
from
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of
 adults that school would never teach you. Apart from that
,
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,
 juvenility
are
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is
 more able to cope with the fierce
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 and know how to deal with
unforseen
not anticipated
unforeseen
harzards
a source of danger; a possibility of incurring loss or misfortune
hazards
 they ones could face with. After walking through the staminas, a person would become more mature and self-reliant by making their own money without relying on parents.
On the other hand
, working at an early age can dilute their studying as they pay more attention to the work without considering the lesson. As a consequence, children may fail the exam and drop out of school. It is
also
 because after a long-hour of working, ones usually feel exhausted and be unable to finish academic tasks. When a person
do not have
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does not have
 a certification to graduate, a lower likelihood they can enter
to
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into
 high- paid companies or the job market in general. In conclusion, as it mentioned
,
Accept space
,
 ones can gain practical and real experience when it comes to working at a young age,
however
 the main duty of the youth is to study and students must not neglect.
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