In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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The problem of
traffic
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is not only in developed or
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
countries but
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countries, but
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in industrialised nations; which has now taken the shape of burning issue caused by innumerable reasons which are
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by many adverse effects universally. Some people
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that one possible solution of
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problem is to apply high taxes on car drivers and use that money for better public transportation.
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essay will discuss both merits and demerits about
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measure. There are
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a number
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measure.
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, If
government
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increase car
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taxes car
drivers avoid using cars due to their higher charges and rather than using
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their personal
vehicles, they use public
transport
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. For
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reason, Not only the
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is
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people
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use
public
transport
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and appreciate the
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's work.
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the government
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has
enough money to provide better public
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to their citizens.
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, air pollution and
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would
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decrease
day by day and it would more beneficial for our environment and for better green future. Every coin has two sides, just like
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solution. If we have some benefits from
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, we
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have drawbacks for it. On very
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is not
accesible
capable of being reached
accessible
; They
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drive to reach their
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
and pay huge amount of tax. Because of
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charge
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feel
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burdened, and
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a certain fixed amount
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tax and so
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,
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for
every person. To recapitulate, plethora effective measures can be taken to overcome
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issue. Eventually the
government
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should introduce strict
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law enacted by a legislative body
legislations
to mitigate the worst situation caused by
traffic
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, but there are pros and cons of introducing
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a policy.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traffic congestion
  • Emissions
  • Revenue generation
  • Public dissatisfaction
  • Political issues
  • Financial burden
  • Environmental benefits
  • Efficiency and accessibility
  • Taxation
  • Heavily taxing
  • Private car owners
  • Fund improvements
  • Discourage the use
  • Healthier environment
  • Public transport quality
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