The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the media tend to show more issues and emergencies on their
news
channels or papers than positive
news
, which is said to be harmful to our society by some
people
. In my perspective, it is both beneficial and disadvantageous for the individual or for the communities. First of all, exhibiting some serious, issues can help
people
to be aware
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our recent situations and it
also
help
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them prepare for the consequences in
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times of emergencies.
secondly
, Posting about some serious problems
can
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might
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lead them to find
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solutions too.
For instance
, manifesting the
news
on climate change can lead
people
to understand the importance of
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and
also
make them drop the usage of fossil fuels in the foreseeable future.
Furthermore
, Revealing the deeds of various political parties can help the
people
to choose their leader wisely. Posting about robbery, thieves or cyber crimes can help
people
to stay aware in order to stay safe.
On the other hand
, focusing on crimes or negative stories can make a huge impact on
people
's
mind
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.
For example
, Children are the most vulnerable because of their age and watching crime or terrorism stories continuously can affect their poorly educated
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.
Moreover
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information about positive changes can be more useful information which helps
people
expand their
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while
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bad
news
and difficulties might affect
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people
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mind
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minds
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.
For example
, many
people
who have been living in my hometown started to make
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or riots against the government after watching and reading the disadvantages of the recently built government company.
To conclude
, despite
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so many drawbacks of showing negative issues and emergencies by the media, it is important that,
people
have knowledge about the bad situations and I am partially in favour of posting
such
news
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news reports
  • media focus
  • negative news
  • positive developments
  • stress and anxiety
  • skewed perception of reality
  • world view
  • desensitization
  • pessimistic outlook
  • general public
  • mental well-being
  • proactive problem-solving
  • holistic view
  • informed decision-making
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