All around the globe every year many animal species become extinct. However some people feel that government should be concerned more with solving problems of human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Any attempt to reduce human-caused
species
extinction
(
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e., to protect endangered
species
) requires an understanding of
extinction
rates over geological time. Fossil records from nearly any geological age reveal two types of
extinction
:
extinction
without replacement ("dead-end") and what might be called "
chronologic
relating to or arranged according to temporal order
chronological
extinction
" or ''taxonomic
extinction
." The
first
type is genuine
extinction
; it is the end of an evolutionary lineage. The
second
type is based on the recognition by
paleontologists
a specialist in paleontology
palaeontologists
palaeontologists'
that one
species
has changed through geological time (
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e., has evolved) to the extent that it is classified as a different
species
from the
next
earliest representative of its lineage. The
species
involved (see Martin and Barnosky, 1993; Nadachowski, 1993; Turner, 1993) represent an evolutionary continuum rather than an evolutionary dead-end. The discussion that follows is concerned only with dead-end
extinction
. The past 20 years have witnessed major advances in our understanding of the earth's physical history (including understanding of
paleoclimate
, changing sea level, volcanism, and plate tectonics), and knowledge of past plant and animal communities is much improved. With refinements in radiometric dating,
stratigraphy
, and the discovery and analysis of varied sources of
paleoenvironmental
data (from cave deposits, ice cores, pollen cores, fossil dung, packrat middens, tree rings, etc.), we now can correlate many biotic and abiotic events in earth history with reasonable accuracy. What we learn from studying the past is important for predicting biotic responses to future changes in climate and other physical phenomena (Burney, 1993). The marine invertebrate fossil record reveals at least five mass-
extinction
events during the past 500 million years, in which from 14% to 84% of the genera or families disappeared from the fossil record (Jablonski, 1991; Raup and Jablonski, 1993; Benton, 1995). Perhaps the two best known of these mass-
extinction
events are the Permian-Triassic (P-T) 245 million years ago and the Cretaceous-Tertiary (K-T) 65 million years ago.
In addition
to marine invertebrates, the P-T event involved
extinction
of terrestrial plants and insects (Retallack, 1995); the K-T event included most reptiles. A much more recent mass
extinction
, that of the Pleistocene-Holocene (PH) only 11,000 years ago, featured
extinction
of more than 100 terrestrial
species
of birds and large mammals in North, Central, and South America.
Although
extinction
is common to the P-T, K-T, and P-H events, they differ from the current
extinction
event in several ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem balance
  • pollination
  • biochemical compounds
  • conservation efforts
  • intrinsic value
  • mitigating poverty
  • sustainable development
  • urgent solutions
  • ethical standpoint
  • resource allocation
  • interconnectedness
  • wildlife protection
  • human challenges
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