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An increasing number of people are changing their job. What do you think are the reason? Do you think it is positive or negative?

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Recently, it has been focused that more employees unwilling to stay
in
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with
 a company for
long time
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a long time
. The purpose of
this
 essay is to discuss the possible reasons and analysis the
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 of
this
 phenomenon. One of the most important
reason
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reasons
 for people changing jobs is learning more skills. In common, bosses tend to require workers still learning a certain skill and mastering it well, particularly in cooperations, which could make people more efficient at work. So, if someone
want
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wants
 to gain other know-how, changing jobs is a direct and simple approach to expand scope of competence.
Second
, higher salary is another significant reason. It is
a
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an
 interesting and universal situation that many who work for a company several years and keep a good performance, haven’t gained
a
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an
 obvious pay increase, even lower than a new colleague who just graduate.
However
, other employers would provide
hight
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
 wage, much higher than before, to those people for their experience.
A
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An
 essential benefit of changing jobs is finding a right career. It means that switching jobs a few times can help workers finding a career that they like enough to stick with for 10 or 20 years without getting burned out.
For instance
, the founder of Alibaba, a China internet giant,
Mayun
an adult person who is male (as opposed to a woman)
man
 had been
a
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an
 English teacher and other jobs before established the company.
In contrast
, job hopping
frequently
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frequencies
 is negative for relationships. If a
workers
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worker
 switches jobs every couple of years, it may be difficult for him to form strong relationships.
Nevertheless
, Strong work relationships in most industries is a recipe that people could be promoted. To summarize, learning more skills or obtaining higher
salary maybe
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salary, maybe
 let employees to consider changing their jobs. But based on clear both positive and negative influences, I hold that people should think three times before resigning.
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