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These days people in some country are living in a "throw-away" society which mean people use things in a short time then throw them away. What are its causes and what are its problems? What could be done to address this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the recent years, the most people use the "throw away" society has developed. In
this
 essay will explain the influenced by short
time
usage
 and caused by above cause. In the
first
, The world people use the easy things
,
Accept space
,
which is the increased,
for example
,
plastic
 bag, one
usage
 pack, and past food pack etc., These
usage
Suggestion
usages
 demand the busy life and urban life of people.
For example
, the city people work at 8 hours a day,
therefore
 they do not have
enought
as much as necessary
enough
time
 of the cooking and cleaning. May be
use
Suggestion
used
 the "throw away" society developed that cause. In the
second
,
the short
Suggestion
shorter
time
usage
 is the most influencing problem in ecosystem, and ecology pollution. The waste of
plastic
, and one
usage
 things, which is highly influenced world warm, and pollution of the ocean and the sea.
For example
, some ocean pulled the
plastic
 wastes,
therefore
 some researchers study the
plastic
 composing bacteria study.
On the other hand
, the recycling industry of
usage
Suggestion
usable
 materials has developed in the world. In the result, reduce the short
time
usage which
Accept comma addition
usage, which
 is the one of the solution of "throw away" society decreasing. The other solution is the study of the recycling experiment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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