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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which do you think is a better educational system?

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The bar chart compares the proportion of educating levels in three distinct sectors regard to
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 scale in Glasgow in 2010. It is clear that students, who continuously pursuing university, made up the majority in all
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 groups with the except of the
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 over 75, whereas, No qualification segment was the smallest component in the chart in 4 out of 5 groups. Youngsters from the
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 of 24 to 35 took the lion’s shared of university degree at 76 %
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 was over triple times that of the elderly over 75. There was a similar proportion of dwellers who obtained the university degree in the 35-50 group and the youngest group, at 71 %.
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, the number of citizens achieving a bachelor degree in 50 to 75 years old has been just a half. In terms of school certificate, there were three groups taking up the same figure at 20% compared to just 15% in the
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 from 24 to 35. Surprisingly, the oldest group saw only 3% of people who had school certificated, but more than 70% of senior citizens did not get any qualification.
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, older people from 50-75 without certificate was relatively high at 30% compared with under 10% in the other three groups.
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