Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays a large number of

animals

are struggling with extinction danger. It is considered by some that people and governments should take the responsibility of saving them,

while

others argue that the focus of the universe should be on mankind. In my opinion, the combination of both ideas serves us with a better answer. On the one hand,

due to

global warming and excessive hunting which are fully associated with

humans

,

this

world is not safe for the diversity of

animals

anymore.

Consequently

, rulers of countries and

also

individuals should take some measures in order to safeguard these creatures.

Furthermore

, these creatures, not only are vitally important to maintain the ecosystem, but

also

,

they

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guarantee the existence of

humans

for

next

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the next

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generation.

For example

, honeybees enable flowers and

floral

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to thrive and breed

beside

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besides

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it

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that

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, they

produced

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nutrition-rich honey, which is a kind of medicine for

humans

.

On the other hand

, not everything can be summed up around

animals

.

Humans

are

also

struggling with a noticeable amount of troubles that demand to be taken into account. If we invest the majority of our resources in taking care of species without regard

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for

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to

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ourselves, we are not going to

last

long enough.

As a result

, human beings should

also

be responsible for their surroundings to live a better life.

for instance

, imagine a day

that

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when

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all money

spent

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is spent

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on

animals

and nothing

remained

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remains

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for

humans

to live which

result

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results

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in the extension of not only

humans

but

also

the earth.

Finally

, I believe that if we are able to put both measures

in

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the same path,

in other words

, the ability to take care of ourselves and

animals

at the same time, will aid us in the way of protecting our earth. In conclusion, it seems that the mixture of both ideas will provide a brighter outcome than implementing the ideas individually.