It is often claimed that wealthy nations should provide financial support to poorer countries for welfare, health, and education. However, there are those who believe that it is the responsibility of developing nations to provide these services. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Financial assistance to penniless states has become a debatable topic nowadays. Some people believe that public funds should be allocated to backing the social needs in poor counties. While others think, the opposite, they should be held accountable for these problems they have in their countries.
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essay agrees that material backing for non-industrialized states should be provided. The essay will discuss both points of view.
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of all, financial assistance to undeveloped countries should be a part of responsibility wealthy nations. Linking Words
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, investment on basic needs Linking Words
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as education, medicine and food, would help to avoid hunger, the amount of death, Linking Words
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, decrease the number of uneducated people. Linking Words
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by step, would improve life and economy in penniless countries. It is Suggestion
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agreed that providing financial support is a part of globalization and extremely beneficial for the world in general. Linking Words
For instance
, Russia invests money to Mongolia, that has a positive effect on living standards.
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However
, there is an opinion, that poor nations are held accountable for providing these services. Financial support could have terrible and negative consequences as a corruption, control political regime and colonialism. Despite Linking Words
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, in 21th century, we have instruments that can control and restrain these processes. Linking Words
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, if a strong state tried to dominate on poor country, The United Nations would eliminate Linking Words
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unbalance.
In conclusion, while the benefits of financial support, particularly for basic needs, allow to reduce material Linking Words
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between countries and develop in the future. Suggestion
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, some still feel that it has negative reflection which allow wealthy countries take a chance to dominate on poorer nations. Linking Words
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, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of financial help to social service, the benefits would be clearly positive.Linking Words
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