Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

in
Suggestion
In
fact that the question of whether to create housing areas by providing taller buildings or to build houses on a wider area of land remains a source of controversy in the field.
while
Suggestion
While
a number of people want
living
Suggestion
to live
in condensed urban areas,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue that should live in the
surburbs
a residential district located on the outskirts of a city
suburbs
.
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
, in apartments having
higher quality
Suggestion
a higher quality
of
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
in return, the traffic conditions are not favourable.
for
Suggestion
For
example, traffic jams often occur during
rushhour
Suggestion
rush hour
.
however
Suggestion
However
, sanitation still not good.
besides
Suggestion
Besides
, that when living in
apartment
Suggestion
an apartment
the apartment
, it is
also
accompanied by expensive expense.
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
, living in apartment blocks means living
proximately
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
located the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, life will be bustling and even noisy.
if
Suggestion
If
you live in here, you will not comfortable to do what you want to do.
on
Suggestion
On
the other hand,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly believe that living in the houses on a wider area of land is the best opinion for people who fancy peace and comfort like me.
for
Suggestion
For
example, living in space like
surburban
Suggestion
Surburban
suburbia
will have a garden or a garage.
moreover me
Accept comma addition
Moreover, I
Moreover me
Moreover I
moreover I
can design them to our liking.
it
Suggestion
It
is
also
suitable for people who have weak resistance as the environment here is cleaner.
it
Suggestion
It
is nice when we have a night party and no one complained.
another
Suggestion
Another
reason is that there are no unfortunate accidents when falling from sky crappers or dehydration, no clean water often occur.
in
Suggestion
In
brief, both views
centainly
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
have some
validityto
Suggestion
validity to
my mind it is better to living in houses
on
Suggestion
in
a wider area of land.
countries
Suggestion
Countries
should make the best use of
surplusland
Suggestion
surplus land
so that people have new residential areas without crowding in metropolises.
Submitted by huyền phạm on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: