Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occuring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?

In the past, it is prevalent for a couple to get married and start a family at a young age.
However
, the situation nowadays is different as couples tend to delay having a child. There are a number of reasons for
this
trend and some impacts, both negative and positive. One of the driving forces behind
this
trend is the changing of
society
in employment. More and more educated women are entering the workforce and
as a result
, they get married and have children later in life.
This
is nearly incapable to change as women cannot combine both families and work properly. Having children has a high cost
such
as hospitalization funds, schooling, and clothing which makes couples prefer to have children late when their conditions are good enough.
For example
, couples from the countryside have low income and bad conditions would prefer getting to the city and wait until conditions are fine to have a child.
This
delay has led to several impacts on
society
and families.
First
, it can be more difficult for older women to get pregnant and they may experience more health problems,
such
as miscarriage, high blood pressure, or diabetes, during pregnancy. One impact that could be positive to
society
is that when couples concentrate on work, that country would have a strong workforce.
However
, when that generation of
workers
Suggestion
worker
retires, the country will lack workers, and they need to pay for
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
export.
For example
, Japan has an
old
Suggestion
older
workforce so they need to hire workers from other countries. In conclusion, several reasons have resulted in the fact that people delay having children and
this
has affected
society
, both negatively and positively.
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