The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Towns A and B in two years, 1960 and 2010

The pie charts compare the proportion of

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in three fields in two towns in two different years 1960 and 2010.

Overall

, in 1960 the

sales

field was considered

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the most popular field for both towns.

Also

, after 50 years,

while

the

percentage

of workers in

town

A working in the manufacturing

sector

was higher than the others, the majority in

town

B choose

sales

. In 1960, there were 29% of people working in manufacturing in

town

A

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stood at the lowest position, but in 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the

percentage

of workers in manufacturing to 64%, placing it ahead of the figures for

sales

and

services

.

By contrast

, the service

sector

made up the largest employment rate, at 41% followed by 30% in the figure for

services

in 1960, but after that, both of those almost halved to 20% and 16%, respectively in 2010. In

town

B, in the same pattern as

town

A in 1960, the highest

percentage

of workers recorded for the

sales

field at 70%. At the same time, the

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in

services

, at 20% was double that of manufacturing. In 2010, the

sales

sector

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a significant decrease to 53% but was still

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compared to a rise of 15% and 2% in the figures for the manufacturing and

services

sector

, respectively.