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The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Towns A and B in two years, 1960 and 2010

The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Towns A and B in two years, 1960 and 2010
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The pie charts compare the proportion of
workforce
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the workforce
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 in three fields in two towns in two different years 1960 and 2010.
Overall
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, in 1960 the
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 field was considered
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the most popular field for both towns.
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, after 50 years,
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 the
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 of workers in
town
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 A working in the manufacturing
sector
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 was higher than the others, the majority in
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 B choose
sales
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. In 1960, there were 29% of people working in manufacturing in
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 A
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stood at the lowest position, but in 2010 witnessed a dramatic increase in the
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 of workers in manufacturing to 64%, placing it ahead of the figures for
sales
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 and
services
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.
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, the service
sector
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 made up the largest employment rate, at 41% followed by 30% in the figure for
services
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 in 1960, but after that, both of those almost halved to 20% and 16%, respectively in 2010. In
town
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 B, in the same pattern as
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 A in 1960, the highest
percentage
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 of workers recorded for the
sales
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 field at 70%. At the same time, the
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 of
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the workforce
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 in
services
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, at 20% was double that of manufacturing. In 2010, the
sales
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sector
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experiencend
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experienced
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 a significant decrease to 53% but was still
highest
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the highest
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 compared to a rise of 15% and 2% in the figures for the manufacturing and
services
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sector
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, percentage, town, sector, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dominant sector
  • proportion
  • employment sectors
  • distribution
  • shifts
  • trends
  • growth
  • decline
  • main sector
  • 50-year period
  • comparison focus
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • evolution
  • observed
  • highlight
  • underlie
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