Prison in the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you Agree or disagree?

It is believed that Imprisonment is the most way to punish criminals, but some people think that offenders should be
education
Suggestion
educated
. In my opinion, While I accept that
education
is a more effective solution to handle
this
problem, I
also
prison is an important role in
prevent
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preventing
crime It is
evedent
clearly revealed to the mind or the senses or judgment
evident
obedient
that imprisonment has a huge array of benefits.
Firstly
, it ensures the safety of other
citizents
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
. Because it helps prevent potential criminals from engaging in serious
such
as robbery or murder, which pose a serious threat to
community
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the community
.
Moreover
, receiving capital punishment
help hinder
Accept comma addition
help, hinder
offenders from
reoffending
offending against or breaking a law or rule
offending
after release back into society. Because they fear of receiving a prison sentence.
For example
, in my country, a large variety
lawbreakers
Suggestion
lawbreaker
maked
produced by a manufacturing process
made
make
makes
a fresh start
On the other hand
, I think that
education
plays a vital role in studying criminals.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
governments could be sent them to reform school with a target of avoiding breed resentment during their time imprison.
Therefore
, central authorities should create rehabilitation programmes, which will provide a tremendous amount of information and vocational training for lawbreakers with an aim of integrating into society.
Moreover
, having several causes of crime is a lack of training to family. Because parents spend less time taking care of their children, making children without parental care and monitoring. As a results, children spend a lot of time with their friend and engage in criminal activities
such
as shoplifting or dug abuse due to peer pressues  In c
onclusio
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
n, I totally that offences behind bars is effective way to prevent commit a crime, but I
also
believe that
education
brings a lot of benefits for offendes
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tackles root causes
  • preventative approach
  • critical thinking
  • decision-making skills
  • recidivism rates
  • equipping
  • socio-economic benefits
  • underlying factors
  • poverty
  • ignorance
  • lack of opportunities
  • rehabilitation
  • ineffective
  • higher rates of re-offending
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