Some people think that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They think that fast food restaurant have made our life easier and less stressful. To what extent do you agree.

It is irrefutable that cooking meals at
home
is a
wastage
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waste
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of
time
. A certain segment of
nation
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the nation
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that daily use of fast
food
is
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very
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a very
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bad effect
of
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on
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human
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the human
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body.
While
other
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others
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opine that fast
food
makes our
life
easier and less stressful. I completely agree with the following statement. I would like to explicate it at length in the paragraphs to come.
To begin
with
the
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first and
the
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foremost
that
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every person
has
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is
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more
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very
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busy in daily
life
so
that
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they do not cook
food
at
home
they spend more
time
to do
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doing
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work without any problems.
This
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point we can consider that most
of
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the
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individual
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individuals
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purchase
the
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fast
food
on
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in
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the
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restaurant with the help of online
booking
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bookings
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such
as
uber
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eat, zomato and
swiggy
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. These
company
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companies
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provide very fast services to deliver the
food
at
home
without any problem.
Thus
the restaurant
provide
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provides
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best
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the best
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services to save
the
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time
.
Moreover
, one more
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point that cannot be
ignore
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ignored
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most
of
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the
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apply
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people like to eat delicious and spicy junk
food
so
that
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they purchase
the
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junk
food
on
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from
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the
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restaurant
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restaurants
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because they have no
time
to make
food
at
home
in their busy
life
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lives
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in
this
way they
safe
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save
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our more
time
to purchase raw material to make meals at
home
.
Hence
fast
food
made our
life
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lives
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easier and better. After
over
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all the analysis, it can be concluded that junk
food
safe the
time
to maintain our
hard working
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life
so
that
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government must
be provide
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provide
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advance
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advanced
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fast
food
company
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companies
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that gave
the
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fresh and healthy
food
any where
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anywhere
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any
time
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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