most museums charge for admission while others free

It is generally considered that most museums can be free as most people believe that every
people
Suggestion
person
should benefit from museums.
On the other hand
, others believe that museums should not be free because most people can use these museums for their bad purposes.
Besides
, they believe that if we want development of these museums, these museums should not be free. As far as I am concerned, people should not give
money
in order to enter museums in various aspects so I believe that admission is
disadvantegous
constituting a disadvantage
disadvantageous
.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that museums are prominent places to do research on any subject so students have to use these museums more than people,
however
, students generally cannot enter these museums due to inadequate
money
. By way of example, in Turkey many students who studying history cannot go to any museums until they graduate so they cannot
imrove
to make better
improve
their.
Hence
, museums should be free in order
to
Suggestion
for
people and especially students can improve their
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
.
Furthermore
, another
diasdavnatage
is that people do not want to give
money
to enter museums generally because they think that
money
can be used
more useful
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more usefully
instead
of giving museums. As a good illustration for
this
, most people in the world do not prefer going museums. In the same way, these people’s children do not want to go to museums and
this
cause to disappear many
culture
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cultures
because people cannot learn their history.
Consequently
, I believe that museums
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be free in order to improve people’s knowledge and prevent vanishing cultures.
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