In many countries,children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many

nation

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nations

, children falling

in to

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into

unhealthy overweight

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unhealthy, overweight

and few people impost that its government responsibility to look after the children.I strongly believe that parents should monitor on their children and provide them with

healthy diet

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a healthy diet

and engage them with some type of physical activity, in order to maintain

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thier

of them or themselves

their

health and fitness. Nowadays, children are more affinity towards the junk and fast

food

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, which has very negative effects on the health and

wellbeing

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well being

. It provides good flavour to the

mouth but

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mouth, but

it has no benefits for the body, rather it

block

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blocks

the

metabolism

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metabolic

system and accumulated all fats and cholesterol. In present era parents are

aslo

in addition

also

not taking enough trouble to prepare a healthy meal for their children and provide them with. In

this

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digital world children can find everything online and there are many options that they can get everything at

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thier

of them or themselves

their

door, meaning,

first

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of all children eat junk

food

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as well as

they

of them or themselves

their

physical activity is very limited.

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Hence they

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Hence, they

tend to become overweight and adopt unhealthy.

For example

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, we can see the

incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

numbers

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number

of junk

food

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stalls and restaurants along the roadside and it's always seen with overcrowding.

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, government has its own duties and responsibilities, they have

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thier

of them or themselves

their

greater responsibility than

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.

if

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If

they interfere in

this

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, of how to have control over becoming overweight and unhealthy among children,

then

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questions to all parents and family, towards

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thier

of them or themselves

their

role in upbringing of the children. Only Government can stop the companies which manufacturing and supply of fast

food

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and

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secondly could

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secondly, could

make more gym

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

so that children can make use of it and maintain

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thier

of them or themselves

their

health. In conclusion, its responsibility of each and everyone to look after

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thier

of them or themselves

their

children and encourage them only to go for healthy diets and some exercise. Which will bring forth in maintaining a balanced body fitness.