In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
It is often believed by many people that having a own building is a blessing than staying in a rented flat. In fact, people from
old
generations always insist on possessing a home, even if it makes them go through the pain of things like mortgages, loans etc. In my Suggestion
older
opionion
, if you have a a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
continous
running source of income and enough fund balance to continue and support your family life, continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
then
I would definetly
vouch for getting a house, else it is big no.
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
However
, it is often observed that people end up buying houses by taking loans. There are several reasons behind these
. One of which is, social status, which is very firmly entrenched in our system. Staying in a rented place is better in denotes a person or thing
this
soo
many ways. to a very great extent or degree
so
For instance
, if one wants to explore job opportunities in different parts of country
or Suggestion
the country
a country
world
for that matterSuggestion
the world
,
Accept space
,
then
they do not have to restrict themselves which is not the case with own house. One must have to either compromise with thier
plans or hunt for alternatives of them or themselves
their
such
as selling it,
most of the times at a lower purchase rate.Accept space
,
Consequently
, experiencing a loss deal. I beleive
that all depends on your long term goal and your financial status.
In conclusion, one can always buy accept as true; take to be true
believe
house
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a house
the house
over
renting it provided they have enough equity and clarity towards long term aspirations.Suggestion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite