A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

In modern time, numbers of
aged
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aging
people suffering from loneliness and feel physically unfit, and
this
is due to very small family background and children living abroad.
This
could be solved by children stay with their old parents and
secondly
Government could open more old
age
house with advanced facilities. Nowadays, family structure is very limited, consisting only with three to four members. And
this
home
background creates many uncertainties for the parents themselves when they grow older. Now people are moving out of their country, leaving the aged once at
home
. Some do take with
them but
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them, but
most of them do not want their mom and dad to be with them.
For example
, in
India at
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India, in
India in
Kerala, many houses are left with two old people or even homes are shut down and old parents are kept in the old
age
home
,
becoz
for the reason that; on account of
because
they can't take along with them due in family visa they are not included.
On the other hand
,
this
growing situation of loneliness and lack of
health fitness
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health, fitness
for
elderly
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the elderly
could be resolved by government help and support.
Union
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The union
can take responsibility to look after the aged people of the nation by opening more old
age
houses and provide them with all advanced health related equipments. And
secondly
, children who are moving from their native and getting settled outside the country could take with them and look after them with all
neccesities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
.
For example
, Indira
niketan
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Niketan
of
elderly house
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an elderly house
the elderly house
in
banglore
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Banglore
, is well furnished with all the required latest needs
for
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of
the people. They are looked after very well. They have timely gym and exercise, entertainment and there are assigned people to be with them at all times.I believe
,
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,
by doing
this
can save the elderly feel loneliness and unfit. In conclusion, it's not fair to leave the aged parents alone in the house or separate them in their old
age
. It's
also
the responsibility of their children to look after and respect the aged parents. They make sure that elderly people feel at
home
and are healthy till they are alive.
Its
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It's
also
the duty of a union to ensure the health and well being of the aged public of the country.
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