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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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Generally speaking, I would like to explain what leisure activities are meant and why people or children are looking for something stimulating and pleasant. Parents strongly desire to educate their kids in the best way, giving them different stimulus to their brain, often providing them with something that they want to do. The big aspiration of each parent is to create the best ground for the future of their children. Nowadays, both parents having a full time job are not able to spend time with their children so they have to manage their kids' free time giving them the possibility to enjoy what are they are doing.   To be honest, I think that these sorts of activities must be both educational and enjoyable. If I had to be a parent, I would
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 put a priority on my kid personality and his or her personal features, I would consider how to combine both aspects. Personally, I think that leisure activities are necessary and extremely relevant not only for kids but for everybody. We usually do and plan our daily life with different tasks and activities because we want to expand our knowledge and appreciate life. So, we can state that is a question of curiosity
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 mastering knowledge.
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