Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines . Does it bring advantages or disadvantages

Many believe that considerable amount of work that used to be performed by

hands

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the hands

are now being replaced by machines. In my

opinion

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opinion, this

this

increases dependency and has brought more negative impact than positive

To begin

with

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technological advancement

are accelerating

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is accelerating

at greater speed than we have ever imagined

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As a result

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it has helped to improve businesses

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economy and educational sectors and has opened doors to many opportunities

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Furthermore

, health sectors

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have also bloomed

also

bloomed. Not only

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this, it

has made communication and travel so easy and has made the world

much smaller place

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a much smaller place

to live in

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Although

the development of machines has

plethora

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a plethora

of advantages

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I

however

feel that the disadvantages of the development outweigh its advantages

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Firstly

, our dependency on machines has increased significantly

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Everybody has become very lazy and victims of obesity.

For instance

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in the past every household work was performed manually because there was no vacuum cleaner

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dish washer

a machine for washing dishes

dishwasher

or washing machines

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Thus people

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Thus, people

were physically healthy

compaired

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

to the present generation

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Secondly

, because the machines have higher efficiency most jobs are performed by them in the offices.

As a result

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many job

oppurtunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

are

confesticated

take temporary possession of as a security, by legal authority

confiscated

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Furthermore

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when machine dominates

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only skilled population will be employed and the rest will have to face difficulties getting employment

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Thus

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this

degrades their living standard because they cannot generate income to support their family

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This

will result in the introduction of outrageous crimes disrupting the harmony of the society

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Thus

to conclude, increase dependency on machines not only unhealthy but

also

creates

diaharmony

a lack of harmony

disharmony

and disparity in the society

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