Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines . Does it bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

Many people believe that considerable amount of work that used to be performed by

hands

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the hands

are now being replaced by machines.

However

, I think

this

increases dependency and has brought more negative impact than positive.

To begin

with, technological advancement

are increasing

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is increasing

at greater speed than we have ever imagined.

As a result

, it has helped to improve businesses, economy and educational sectors and has opened doors to many opportunities.

Furthermore

, health sectors

has

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have also bloomed

also

bloomed. Not only

this it

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this, it

has made communication and travel so easy and has made the world

much smaller place

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a much smaller place

to live in.

Although

the development of machines has many advantages, I

however

feel that the disadvantages of the development outweigh its advantages.

Firstly

, our dependency on machines has increased significantly. Everybody has become very lazy and victims of obesity.

For instance

, in the past every household work was performed manually because there was no vacuum cleaner, dishwasher or washing machines.

Thus

, people were physically

healthy

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healthier

than the present generation.

Secondly

, because the machines have higher efficiency most jobs are performed by them in the offices.

As a result

, many job opportunities are decreasing.

Furthermore

, when machine dominates, only skilled population will be employed and the rest will have to face difficulties getting employment.

Thus

,

this

degrades their living standard because they cannot generate income to support their family

.

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.

This

will result in the introduction of outrageous crimes disrupting the harmony of the society.

For example

, in many developing countries like India,

crimes

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crime

rates

has

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have

increases

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increased

significantly because of lack of employment.

Thus

to conclude, increase dependency on machines not only unhealthy but

also

creates disharmony and disparity in the society.