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Some people encourage young people to travel and study.. Give some advantages and disadvantages...

#people #travel #study
Nowadays,
alote
give out
allot
all-out
Eliot
 of teenagers
travel
Suggestion
travels
 for studying abroad in high school or university. And most of parents encourage them. We all know that studying abroad would help them to build a
sucsessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
carrer
a person who is responsible for attending to the needs of a child or dependent adult
carer
carrier
, but others are saying that studying abroad is not a correct choice because of many reasons.
First
 of all, the
first
 team is saying that we should encourage young people to study or even work abroad, because they will gain new
knoledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
. To illustrate, many studies shows that most of the
celebrities travel
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celebrities, travel
 a lot and they gain experiences that why we should encourage them.
Moreover
, young people or teenagers will build the future, so if we closed the
doors they
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doors, they
 will not be able to build the new generations that why we should encourage them.
On the other hand
, the
second
 team is saying that we should not encourage them for studying abroad. Our
country
 wants the teenagers effort more than the other countries. So why we encourage them to travel, while we can encourage them to rise our culture.
Also
, if teenagers travelled to study, they would forget
there
of them or themselves
their
 traditions.
In particular
, the
country
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country's
 history would be forgotten. Many studies show that 60% of the studying abroad students could not speak
there
of them or themselves
their
 mother language clear like they were. By the way, we should encourage them to benefit
there
of them or themselves
their
country
 more. To sum up, young people or teenagers are the heart of the
country
. They can build it or
distroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
destroyed
 it.
Then
 it is about
teenagers we
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teenagers, we
 should think deeper that anytime.
This
 topic is double edged. And it will be better if we encourage teenagers to follow
there
of them or themselves
their
 dreams.
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