Rich countries should not give job to skill workers (for example doctors and engineers) of poor countries as they are needed by their home country more than the rich country. Do you agree or dis agree.
It is often argued that developed
countries
should not make opportunity
for Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
skill works
from poor Replace the word
skilled workers
country
because Fix the agreement mistake
countries
there
are much needed Correct pronoun usage
they
to
their native territory rather than Change preposition
in
Change preposition
in other
other
Change the wording
another country
other countries
country
. I completely disagree with this
statement and think skill
works should be offered prospect
to make their way Add an article
the prospect
according to
own. First of all, It is well known fact that private
sector which Correct article usage
the private
are
in rich Correct subject-verb agreement
is
countries
opt to recruit skill works
from developing Replace the word
skilled workers
countries
for their business. It is offered more beneficial for both employer and employee, former
Correct article usage
the former
one
can improve productivity and enhance the quality of product
as well Add an article
the product
a product
as
later Correct word choice
and
one
achieve high paid salary and residency in developed
Add an article
a developed
country
. Moreover
usually migrators donate Add a comma
Moreover,
portion
of Add an article
a portion
salary
Correct pronoun usage
their salary
which has
earned from a rich Verb problem
apply
country
for closer relations as a result
developing country
’s foreign income is gone
up. Wrong verb form
goes
For instance
, In Sri Lanka, annual
total foreign income is 12 us Correct article usage
the annual
billions
Fix the agreement mistake
billion
from
it 75 Change preposition
apply
present
Correct your spelling
per cent
has
earned from foreign workers who Verb problem
is
has
worked in Change the verb form
have
rich
Add an article
a rich
country
. On other
hand, in developing Correct article usage
the other
country
skilled workers are not offered high remuneration and recognition Fix the agreement mistake
countries
that
account they don’t Correct pronoun usage
apply
achieved
Change the verb form
achieve
better
Correct article usage
a better
prospective
about Correct your spelling
perspective
future
Correct article usage
the future
at
their live in mother Change preposition
in
country
. Furthermore
, one
of the most conspicuous trends of todays
young generation who has studied and got well experienced Change to a genitive case
today's
Change preposition
in at
at
poor Correct your spelling
a
country
after migrate
to Wrong verb form
migrating
rich
Correct article usage
a rich
country
contribute
Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
for
improving Change preposition
to
rich
Correct article usage
the rich
country
economy. Change noun form
country's
For example
, according to
Sun Day Times India is pioneer
Correct article usage
a pioneer
country
to
providing graduated medical Change preposition
in
officer
to Fix the agreement mistake
officers
world
Add an article
the world
however
lot of Indian patients have been dead every years
owing to Change to a singular noun
year
lack
of doctors. Correct article usage
a lack
To conclude
, when close analyzes
Wrong verb form
analysing
this
issue one
should be shown that Correct article usage
the government
government
of developing Fix the agreement mistake
governments
countries
should follow strategies for keep
Wrong verb form
keeping
skill
workers in their Replace the word
skilled
mother land
and should not impose Correct your spelling
motherland
restriction
Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
those
Change preposition
on those
are
who try to immigrate.Unnecessary verb
apply
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