Nowadays there is a wide range of TV programs. But instead of watching educational programs, news or documentary films, more and more people prefer to watch TV shows, soap operas or serials. And this negatively affects knowledge acquisition skills. What are the primary causes of this tendency? How is it possible to make educational TV programs more popular?

Nowadays television broadcasting is becoming
more wide
Suggestion
wider
than it was in the past. Today large number of television
show
available.
Although
, without seeing teaching series, local report or fact based movie, vast numbers of people considered to see radio
program
, reality
show
and episodic.
However
,
this
direction has a detrimental impact on talent acquiring abilities.
This
essay will discuss some reason why
this
has occurred and examine the consequences of
this
worrying tendency.
To begin
with, There is a plethora of reasons of
this
movement,
first
and foremost, toady young generations are an enthusiast toward movies and serial as they always
show
a romance, drama and action. In other word current teenagers are not interested to see biography, news and tutor series. Youngsters are today more emphasis on love and relation that's why they do not like a
program
which shoe institution teaching or news.
For instance
, Today a famous T.V
show
name 'Ye he Aashiqi" are capturing more attention of todays children than any educational
show
do.
However
,
this
is not only due to
such
episode, Despite
this
, there are
such
program
which
show
Suggestion
shows
a talent of different person from several regions.
For example
,
show
named " Indias Got Talent" are accountable for capturing most minds towards them.
However
, the effect of
this
have been continued
Suggestion
has been continued
and will continue to be very serious.
Firstly
, a vast number of students are involved in
such
senseless episode, which rid of their sense of humour and make them more extrovert. To illustrate, an individual who is addicted to watching
such
things are more likely to fell anxiety when they are alone.
as
Suggestion
As
a result, they find it difficult to spend most of their time as a lonely. Not only
this
,
Secondly
, as they continue to see
this
series they lost their information adapting ability.
as
Suggestion
As
a result, they are losing their grasping power. Educational channel can make more acceptable through the government effort. As government can impose that every student can attend an
atleast
Suggestion
at least
one
program
in a week and make them ready for presentation at the end of the week,
as a result
student habited to see
such
programs. To conclude, it is evident that there are several causes and variety of the negative effect of
this
worrying trend. As student losing their sense of humour they feel anxiety.
However it
Accept comma addition
However, it
can be reduced through the effort of local authority.
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