Nowadays there is a wide range of TV programs. But instead of watching educational programs, news or documentary films, more and more people prefer to watch TV shows, soap operas or serials. And this negatively affects knowledge acquisition skills. What are the primary causes of this tendency? How is it possible to make educational TV programs more popular?

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Nowadays television broadcasting is becoming

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than it was in the past. Today large number of television

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available.

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, without seeing teaching series, local report or fact based movie, vast numbers of people considered to see radio

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, reality

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and episodic.

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direction has a detrimental impact on talent acquiring abilities.

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and foremost, toady young generations are an enthusiast toward movies and serial as they always

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a romance, drama and action. In other word current teenagers are not interested to see biography, news and tutor series. Youngsters are today more emphasis on love and relation that's why they do not like a

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which shoe institution teaching or news.

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name 'Ye he Aashiqi" are capturing more attention of todays children than any educational

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named " Indias Got Talent" are accountable for capturing most minds towards them.

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a result, they are losing their grasping power. Educational channel can make more acceptable through the government effort. As government can impose that every student can attend an

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