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You have recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an english speaking friend in your letter Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her about other news

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Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well.It has been quite a long since we met.
However
, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I have started my new job in a reputed company
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 my hometown. Let me explain in detail.You know, what we discussed earlier.I described
you
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the complications of my previous job.Since it was in the suburban area,
therefore
 I had to waste a lot of time
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commuting to and from the office.It was really an irksome situation for me.
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 long office hours, I usually got tired, and travelling time adds to my stress. Taking into consideration, the excessive hectic schedule, I applied
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 the distinct IT companies, which are in the downtown region in order to relieve some tension of commuting.Fortunately, I got selection in a renowned organisation with a handsome salary.What is more, it is not so much far from my house.That's why I do not need to travel a lot. Even more importantly, there is
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 for you.I am planning to get married soon, probably in the month of October.I would be extremely delighted to have you at my place on
this
 occasion. Hoping to see you soon. Yours lovingly, Nikita
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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