You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, living in a metropolis for many people represents a chance for the opportunities they could get for a better
life
. Despite
this
, individuals can find many drawbacks spending their
life
in downtown. I believe that the Government should facilitate the migration of citizens to the hinterland area and
this
would help to reduce some problems. As far as I know, criminality is directly proportionate to the dimension of the city. Much bigger is the city more higher is the risk to face delinquents.
For example
, is easy being robbed in downtown not only during the night but
also
during daytime.
Furthermore
, the pollution caused by vehicles and in turn is responsible of many respiratory diseases. As I mentioned before, people living in big cities have to face many problems in everyday
life
. The Government should improve
life
's quality of own residents easing people to live better their lives. For
this
reason, several actions should be taken by government.
For example
, provide new and more convenient solutions for families in the countryside which would help them in reducing the cost of
life
.
Moreover
, police forces, could enforce to keep under control criminality. Another good point, could be the reduction the traffic in the city with rotation of particular vehicles or banned the old cars which cause more pollution. We are living in a 21st century where people have many modern problems to face with. Personally, I think residents should move to regional towns so that they can reduce the issues and can improve the quality of their lives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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