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Many jobs used to be done at home by hand, but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

#jobs #home #hand #machines #development
In
this
 modern world of advanced technology, people were more relying on home appliances for daily household activities as in the past they do all of it by themselves. The invention of advanced electronic machines is helping people to save time, which they invest in doing regular housekeeping activities.
For instance
, washing machines help people to save their precious time and energy which they spent on washing clothes by hand in the past.
Moreover
, it helps parents to save time, which they can enjoy with their children.
However
, there are few cons associated with
use
Suggestion
the use
 of machines
such
 as health problems. There was a survey conducted by local newspaper which revealed that people who do not
use
 home appliances were more healthy than people who were in the habit of using them. If we talk about microwaves, it got banned from Japan because
use
 of it was leading to serious health problems like cancer, hypertension. According to me we should only
use
 these appliances when required so that we can maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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