Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today's present world, the role of teachers is hardly debated. Some individuals suppose that teachers should not interfere with education, while others strongly believe that
educatar
someone who educates young people
educators
should
play one of
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play one
the
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The
major role in upbringing teenagers and explain them whether their actions is right or wrong. Undoubtedly, teachers should contribute to the development of the child,
that is
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mean that they should give students some awareness of the actions they do. As an example, we can take primary school where it is easier to explain something to
kid
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the kid
kids
, as
namelly
as follows
namely
normally
in
this
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age group, children are more susceptible and receptive to the information they
reseived
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
receive
.
Moreover
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, with
teachers help
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the teachers help
,
stidents
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
get the wage diversity of knowledge for
future career
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future careers
. On the other side, teachers should not overstep the bounds of what is permissible. They should do their work and give more chance to
perents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parent
represent their abilities in
upbringing their
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upbringing, their
child, as they the
first
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people who should impose to their children what is
write
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written
or not. Apart from that,
educator
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the educator
do not contradict
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does not contradict
parenting, as it can be
harm
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harmed
for
child's mind
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a child's mind
.
For instance
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, we can take the
siuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
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when mother bringing her son's up and explain them that should usually have their own opinion when they make some big
desitions
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
, but in school teacher say all the other way around, so
this
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is greatly
disturbs
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disturbed
disturbing
the psyche of the student. To conclude,
this
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both
opibnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinions
have advantages and disadvantages
,
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,
but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally
inclide
have as a part, be made up out of
include
that teachers should pay a bit attention on student behaviour and explain to him some
consiquences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
of his
further
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actions.
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