Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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has faced
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have faced
pollution
in the air. However
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People
has
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have also been devoted
also
been devoted steps to enhance the environmental quality such
as completing garbage procedure
from house to recycled companies. Suggestion
the garbage procedure
Also
, people has
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have also been
had also been
also
been aware about hazardous effects
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the hazardous effects
by
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of
from
pollution
.
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,
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transportation but
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transportation, but
also
use electrical vehicle. Nevertheless
, people have been trying to use carpooling
as well as private transportation. a telegram sent abroad
cabling
for
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both
fuel and time .
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government
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the government
also
been trying to apply legislation about contamination but
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contamination, but
also
slap on wrist against an excessive pollution
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rules
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the rules
.
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Although
its effects seem as nationally ,
industries lead efforts to diminish pollutants. Accept space
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, clothes companies produced an excessive fumes as well as production
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production, although
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government
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the government
adjusted
either time management of production.
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adjust
both
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have been making
have made
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as well as fumes at their own level.if
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both
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filed, then
then
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