Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, magnanimously people

has faced

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have faced

problem to flourish the environmental contamination as well as industries and companies who devotes effort to diminish the problem of

pollution

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in the air.

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, I disagree with

this

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statement about inhabitants are not reforming the pollutants

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

the cleaning because they

has

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have also given

also

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been giving performance at expanding level.

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additionally

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Additionally

this

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essay shall discuss the

both

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prospective views from bird's eye view before arriving a concrete answer.

people

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People

has

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have also been devoted

also

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been devoted steps to enhance the environmental quality

such

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as completing

garbage procedure

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the garbage procedure

from house to recycled companies.

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, people

has

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have also been

had also been

also

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been aware about

hazardous effects

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the hazardous effects

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from

contaminated

pollution

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people not only using fossil fuel based

transportation but

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transportation, but

also

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use electrical vehicle.

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, people have been trying to use

carpooling

a telegram sent abroad

cabling

as well as private transportation.

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for

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For

instance, 5 people could use 1 car for particular destination as well using own vehicle, on the dependency of that they saving

both

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fuel and time

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Not stand

with

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that,

government

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the government

has not

also

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been trying to apply legislation about

contamination but

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contamination, but

also

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slap on wrist against an excessive

pollution

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range.

whether

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Whether

industries applied or not they should follow

rules

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the rules

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Although

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its effects seem as nationally

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industries lead efforts to diminish pollutants.

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, clothes companies produced an excessive fumes as well as

production

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production, although

produced although

produced produced although

although

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government

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the government

had set rule of thumb to

adjusted

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adjust

either time management of production. In conclusion,

both

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inhabitants and industrialization

has been making

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have been making

have made

efforts to plummet

pollution

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as well as fumes at their own level.

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both

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are

filed

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filed, then

then

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neither national has responsible nor countries.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

269 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental awareness
sustainable practices
renewable energy
carbon footprint
waste reduction
conservation
ecosystem
pollution
climate change
responsibility
leadership
legislation
investment
collaboration
systemic change

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