In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#countries #women #men #time #household #works

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philanthropically

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However, in

many kingdoms employments are pretended fully by

both

genders.

Additionally

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Additionally, both

both

genders should segregate equilibrium the

household

chores. I completely agree that equally dividing

household

works

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are

fair

solution

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solved

solving

Firstly

, predominantly in past men had an eight or more hours job and women have

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the onus

a onus

household

chores.

This

is because men should only

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allow

to do

out side

beyond the boundary of; external to

outside

employments as well as house works by social legislation. Not stand with

this

both

genders have been busy in their monotonous life for

sake

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the sake

of money, albeit on dependency of job they are burning as

mid night

12 o'clock at night; the middle of the night

midnight

lamp from

down

the first light of day

dawn

to dusk for completing their dreams. As results of

this

statement ken and women should create time table and segregate equilibrium house works.,

However there

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However, there

are multifarious formulas for

mitigate

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mitigating

the "

household

chores".

Firstly

, if men's employment

are

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different bin time than women

then

they should segregate

household

works by completing mopping and cleaning of vessels.

Nathless

, women have conquered many equal rights as same as men's

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additionally

there have not been gender differences between males and females from starting of 21th century. In conclusion, I

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words by agglomerating reasons and solutions. It may have been argued in

past

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the past

for

both

genders should not share the chores because of men were provided

breadwinning

Nevertheless today's situation

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Nevertheless, today's situation

Nevertheless the today's situation

Nevertheless the today's situation the today's situation

has been changed from 21 the century. I strongly agree that males and females must share

household

chores being illogical

otherwise

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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