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It is irrefutable that
cinema
 is a
source
 of
entertainment
 for the young and the adults of the
nation
. Comedy movies lighten the
mood
 and relieves a
person
 from all
day
stress
.
Furthermore
, traditional scripts were based on the
fiction
 to entertain the spectators. They mostly illustrated comic
character
 It is irrefutable that
cinema
 is a
source
 of
entertainment
 for the young and the adults of the
nation
. Comedy movies lighten the
mood
 and relieves a
person
 from all
day
stress
.
Furthermore
, traditional scripts were based on the
fiction
 to entertain the spectators. They mostly illustrated comic
character
 It is irrefutable that
cinema
 is a
source
 of
entertainment
 for the young and the adults of the
nation
. Comedy movies lighten the
mood
 and relieves a
person
 from all
day
stress
.
Furthermore
, traditional scripts were based on the
fiction
 to entertain the spectators. They mostly illustrated comic
character
 It is irrefutable that
cinema
 is a
source
 of
entertainment
 for the young and the adults of the
nation
. Comedy movies lighten the
mood
 and relieves a
person
 from all
day
stress
.
Furthermore
, traditional scripts were based on the
fiction
 to entertain the spectators. They mostly illustrated comic
character
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